Yet another unedited poem.
:p
Some of us have it.
Some of us don't.
Some of us use it.
Some of us throw it aside.
Some of us don't have it.
But use it anyway.
That is me.
I work
and work
and work
but seem to never achive
what needs to be.
I can not seem to develop talent.
You tell me I am good.
I am better than I think.
That I have achieved talent.
I know you only lie.
You do, though.
You are, have always been
great.
But you deny it.
I tell you you're good.
You are better than you think.
That you have achieved talent.
I know it's true.
That's the same thing you tell me.
Niether of us will believe it to be
true.
We both believe the other is good
and insist it is true.
I am sure you are, though.
Maybe it is true.
Maybe you really do think so.
Maybe I have achieved some.
:p
Some of us have it.
Some of us don't.
Some of us use it.
Some of us throw it aside.
Some of us don't have it.
But use it anyway.
That is me.
I work
and work
and work
but seem to never achive
what needs to be.
I can not seem to develop talent.
You tell me I am good.
I am better than I think.
That I have achieved talent.
I know you only lie.
You do, though.
You are, have always been
great.
But you deny it.
I tell you you're good.
You are better than you think.
That you have achieved talent.
I know it's true.
That's the same thing you tell me.
Niether of us will believe it to be
true.
We both believe the other is good
and insist it is true.
I am sure you are, though.
Maybe it is true.
Maybe you really do think so.
Maybe I have achieved some.
Oh brother, Teresa. I know EXACTLY what and who this is about. :-)
ReplyDeleteMove your ribbon, this was negative towards yourself, young lady.
I know you do. I was gonna write that you better know, but I didn't. Haha.
ReplyDeleteIt helps that we... converse about it right in front of you.
I'm never going to tell him I came to this realization, though. xD
The realization that he might actually be right, that is.
1. It wasn't negative! It's about my... journey to being positive! xD :p
Idk. Lol.
2. You're younger than me!
3. I'm not actually wearing the ribbon yet. Lol. I need to find it. Which requires cleaning my room. Which might take a while.
Both of the poems I literary wrote in ten minutes then posted without reading.