So, this blog is becoming a bit of a poem sharing blog. *shrug*
It's not like I'm going to put them on facebook or anything!
I really do not feel comfortable showing them to.... well, anyone.
*shrugs.*
I have a tendency to get an idea for a poem.
Think about it for at LEAST a week.
Finally write the poem... in 5-10 minutes.
Post it.
Realize I should have spent more time editing it because it sucks.
Then repeat.
That process is no different for this. xD
Btw, that's my excuses for the extreme level of suck.
*moves ribbon*
Dang.
It's not like I'm going to put them on facebook or anything!
I really do not feel comfortable showing them to.... well, anyone.
*shrugs.*
I have a tendency to get an idea for a poem.
Think about it for at LEAST a week.
Finally write the poem... in 5-10 minutes.
Post it.
Realize I should have spent more time editing it because it sucks.
Then repeat.
That process is no different for this. xD
Btw, that's my excuses for the extreme level of suck.
*moves ribbon*
Dang.
Here I stand
thinking
of what to say
to you.
My response.
My thoughts.
They must be spoken-
communicated to you.
I clear my thought.
I know what to say.
What you will soon know.
I open my mouth-
speak.
Words come out.
Words I spoke.
I can not help but wonder
why they are so different from
those thoughts
I meant
and were so
carefully produced.
thinking
of what to say
to you.
My response.
My thoughts.
They must be spoken-
communicated to you.
I clear my thought.
I know what to say.
What you will soon know.
I open my mouth-
speak.
Words come out.
Words I spoke.
I can not help but wonder
why they are so different from
those thoughts
I meant
and were so
carefully produced.

Hahahaha *Moves ribbon* that made me laugh.
ReplyDeleteHmmmmm, this is....interesting. No offense, not the best I've read by you. Just....not that interesting. :-( Sorry, I know that's mean! I did like the last stanza the most though.
Yeah, I know. It kinda sucks. A lot. It did not turn out how I wanted it to. At all.
ReplyDeleteI'm most likely going to rewrite it completely later on.
I just like to post everything. Lol.
And it's not mean. Haha.
:p