01 August 2010

I apologize.

I love you
No, not him, you
You're awesome
an amazing friend

You have only a few flaws
minor flaws
I easily look past
so I can embrace the awesome.

But they keep talking
about these flaws
that affect them
they won't go away

And as much as I try to
I can't stop concentrating on these
one or two little flaws.
I'm sorry.

This one was not just my fingers writing for me, but it did just flow and I wrote the first thing that popped into my mind.

2 comments:

  1. For me, this was just kinda meh. It was better the last couple stanzas, but it just isn't my favorite thing you've written. Maybe because I know about the subject matter....

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  2. Yeah, I agree. It's only so-so. ...Oh well?

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